and you'll see
What youre desperately trying to hide
Its not what you wanted, it's just what you think
Might (just possibly) be second best.
-I hope not...
As you see what is clear,
What you thought was most dear
Is uncostumed- and my, what a sight
This true image you find
Was quite changed by your mind,
Seeming splendid when thought to be right.
Ugh, and now, your small words make my skin seem to crawl,
How you speak them, and don't feel a care!
Just get out of my sight, of my mind, of my life!
To the wise: mediocre? Beware.
I like it.
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The parenthesis part idk about.
You're voice came through though, and that's what matters.
I for one liked the parentheses. I like that this one is quite different from your first few in structure and sound, and I like it better, too. Interesting subject
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