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Sunday, December 19, 2010

Erinyes' Vigil

An idol comes alive
idle in my clutch no longer

and bleeding like tears

her shivering fingers clenched

across bare knuckles read

"RAGE" and "FURY"

a death knell for devils

renewing the ancient pact with

Incantations

the lines of Judgment she intones,


"This is a prayer for the end of the world,

that hymn of condemnation sung on street-corners

and lifted to the fortune-birds!


I behold the true face of Oversoul, O king,

it is marvelous and has one-thousand eyes

surveying your wretched nation.


This is a funeral pyre for great Achilles,

the mythic wheels of mighty Juggernaut

on C
Ășchulainn's gigantic chariot set ablaze.

We are hated for our anger,

abhorrent from all angles, we are hate...


Train your body and sharpen your mind

stretch out tendrils of feeling, insight

accessing the world as its floodgates pour over

O adept, by
Venus within never falter!"

Echoes behind my frozen form

a voice not male nor female

sends comforting chills supernatural

from the Sanctum Sanctorum in-between

where she resides, Metatron the Archangel

a messenger of two-faced conviction

Janus,
the gatekeeper of Apocalypse
and now his Seventh Seal:


"I have been trapped here

for countless years," she says

an automatic voice knowing no context

skips the wild tone on chaotic scales,

"Why have you come to see her burial?"


Badb
our fatal mother, Raven-in-Battle
who lit aflame the chariot's grave

claws one shore and perches the other

feathery shades in gloom

yet the river alone holds significance

that holy space between

(This temple is alive.)


"She sleeps now on the riverbed

and died before my eyes

Nemesis
smolders in the ash
that spirit whom you say is Justice."

5 comments:

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  2. A Glossary of Allusions (because I have no clue how clear I ever am, it's might be kinda hard to tell who's even speaking)...

    Erinyes: the Furies
    CĂșchulainn: an Irish Celtic giant ("kuh-KOO-lan")
    Metatron: a name for the angel in Revelation
    Badb: goddess of death ("BUHV")

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  3. In your comment, I read "clear" as "clever" and found it to be an understatement.

    I love your allusions and kind of free verse meets ancient Greek style poetry. Very nice.

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  4. Very extensive allusions make this a thoroughly esoteric piece. That is not a bad thing but makes it less accessible to those unwilling to look things up.

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  5. I agree with Michael to a degree, though I do love the hellish revolutionary imagery in this poem :) As usual, the rhythm and the sounds you create are very well done.

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