Pale sweat
A flash of sheets,
I shoot up,
And there is the fan,
Humming and hovering,
Staring down at me.
I begin to laugh.
It wasn’t real.
It wasn’t real.
I am, again, quite
Alone.
Alone,
In a thick tangle,
Disoriented in dense wilderness.
I am trapped
Trapped by fear,
Struggling in a prison of vines,
A jail cell jungle
falling
deep
below where I only hear a faint chopping
I enjoyed this. The final line is my favorite, though I'm really not sure why. I think more length and development would not have been bad.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of kind of a prequel to Swati's poem (which I read after this).
ReplyDeleteI liked the word speed. While yours has less words (it makes it faster, more like the rushed sense of waking up), Swati's has more words, because its more thoughtful, slower, and seemingly about those moments before sleep.