What is the Stantonian Association of Interesting People?

My friends, this blog is dedicated to those men and women who go out of their way to be remarkably interesting. In other words, all of those fascinating Stanton students (or, in the rarest of cases, students from other schools) can join this blog to appreciate creative writing developed by us students. I, Braden Beaudreau, the creator of this blog, will post my past, present, and future works on this website, and those who join and comment will get the same opportunities. May all of you live in happiness and peace, and never forget: being interesting is the only way to stand out from the masses.

Monday, September 27, 2010

Obsession

Blink. Breathe. Stop!
A shift at the corner of my vision
Think. Interpret. Dissect.
Still, just a shift
And yet…

Drip. Drip. Drop.
The rain starts to fall,
Obscuring my vision.
I hardly notice.

My mind is elsewhere,
Traveling
Through the past,
The moments.

But the evidence!
My heart screams desperately.
All is inconclusive.
My mind calls it circumstantial.
Coincidence.

You Honor, the witness is
Speculating.
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2 comments:

  1. The Eye AlteringSeptember 27, 2010 at 9:54 PM

    Good to see that you're already posting. I particularly liked the way that the syntax (short, choppy sentences) dictated the pace of the poem.

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  2. Muse for ZarathustraSeptember 28, 2010 at 5:55 PM

    I really like the short syntax as well. I like the piece.

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