What I think
Does it matter? Does anyone care?
What I know
Is it certain? Ambiguous there.
What I feel
Isn’t tangible, I’ve grown up gray
What I am
Is debatable, have it your way
What I do
Has no impact, I’m one of the crowd
What I want
Changes tune based on what I’m allowed
What I’ll be
Is a mystery, can’t add this sum
And it matters neither what I am
Nor what I’ll become.
Perfect structure! i love it. the theme is great too, and your emotion is very well conveyed. and good reflection on society. great piece!
ReplyDeleteI like the parallelism! I agree with Matt, this structure is very creative and effective.
ReplyDeleteGood structure. Very straightforward, not much imagery. I especially enjoy the theme.
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