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My friends, this blog is dedicated to those men and women who go out of their way to be remarkably interesting. In other words, all of those fascinating Stanton students (or, in the rarest of cases, students from other schools) can join this blog to appreciate creative writing developed by us students. I, Braden Beaudreau, the creator of this blog, will post my past, present, and future works on this website, and those who join and comment will get the same opportunities. May all of you live in happiness and peace, and never forget: being interesting is the only way to stand out from the masses.

Thursday, September 23, 2010

Cold

What is a face but the projection of a mind?
Nothing more I can venture to say.
And your face,
With its seductive charm,
Exudes an element of
Intimidating intricacy.

Fiendishly you forge yourself.
It truly is a beautiful thing.
The curling lip and swirling eye
Giving me a terrifying sense of
Uneasiness.
Heart thumps wild, hairs stand tall,
Muscles tense tight, yet mind trumps all.

A bright shining light of wicked
Warmth demanding attention:
"Look at I and no other. Me. Me. Me."

A heat of passing passion.
My how you're cold to the touch.
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5 comments:

  1. The Eye AlteringSeptember 23, 2010 at 5:43 PM

    I can't express how much this poem is similar to the one I'm about to post. It's almost as if we have the same subject.

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  2. The Eye AlteringSeptember 23, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    As for the poem itself, I really like it. I feel like I understand it entirely because, well.. you know why. Good stuff.

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  3. Take It With a Grain of SandSeptember 23, 2010 at 7:23 PM

    This is absolutely brilliant. I like the combination of beauty and underlying evil, and the ending fits it all together perfectly, as the hot/cold contrast really gets your point across nicely and concisely.
    Side note: "passing passion" is a wonderful phrase

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  4. Muse for ZarathustraSeptember 24, 2010 at 6:07 PM

    This is the best you have written in a very long while. At least in my opinion.

    The last three stanzas far and away outshine the first. I love the line "Fiendishly you forge yourself". The isolation of "Uneasiness" worked well. Ditto to everything already said, too.

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  5. AlanSeptember 24, 2010 at 11:06 PM

    Agree with Chris. Its the best in the while.

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