The bomb ticked with silent threat
As the fuse was lit from a distance.
You and I at opposite ends stood
With increasingly weaker resistance.
The fuse grew short, I expected that.
It was natural, it was right,
It had to occur.
Agonizing, demoralizing, tantalizing,
Us despising the tension rising
With each inch of string the spark devoured,
As the bomb pulled away and cowardly cowered.
Then it happened, the brightest of lights,
Like a firework in the sky, exploding
With jagged shards of brilliant illumination.
Except this firework was no joyous sight,
Yet I'm sad to say it gave me delight
To see the very human fright
That tore across your face and into the night.
Everything changed with that mighty crack,
As we were surrounded by a beautiful black.
Now the sky filled with sad debris-
The hopes, the dreams of you and me.
And still we stand at opposite ends
Staring coldly at the other's unchanging face,
And still we mumble words of care
With intentions good and pure,
But that bomb has rendered us numb
Of the feelings those words once did stir.
What is the Stantonian Association of Interesting People?
My friends, this blog is dedicated to those men and women who go out of their way to be remarkably interesting. In other words, all of those fascinating Stanton students (or, in the rarest of cases, students from other schools) can join this blog to appreciate creative writing developed by us students. I, Braden Beaudreau, the creator of this blog, will post my past, present, and future works on this website, and those who join and comment will get the same opportunities. May all of you live in happiness and peace, and never forget: being interesting is the only way to stand out from the masses.
By far the best you have written in awhile. I really really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThe fourth stanza was my favorite, especially the part "Yet I'm sad... into the night."
This is really good. I can feel the anger and resentment just resonating from this poem. I also see you added "beautiful black."
ReplyDeletethanks guys. and yes, yes i did.
ReplyDeleteAgreed. Best in a while, I liked it alot. Good imagery, and good presentation.
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