What is the Stantonian Association of Interesting People?

My friends, this blog is dedicated to those men and women who go out of their way to be remarkably interesting. In other words, all of those fascinating Stanton students (or, in the rarest of cases, students from other schools) can join this blog to appreciate creative writing developed by us students. I, Braden Beaudreau, the creator of this blog, will post my past, present, and future works on this website, and those who join and comment will get the same opportunities. May all of you live in happiness and peace, and never forget: being interesting is the only way to stand out from the masses.

Saturday, April 16, 2011

Unity (Liquid)

deep air vibrations twisting tight
hit-bump boom popping reels
and you know the way you spun
I felt you fierce and twisting too
hip-pounding, shoulders meet
her body beams brightly with her face still
rays wave out stray thumping sway with her
and you know damn well she doesn't dance
you know loud light, heavy piercing pulses
show me how to move
down and down lead me closer now
bring her to the lightning
feel her body (my body) drip, drip, flow
exude light captured in motion
her still face twisting tight in your arms
frozen bright fire, momentary flux
channel, guide, and bend the stream
my body like fiber optics, energy transposed
show her how to move
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 17, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    I like it! You may be going slightly overboard with the alliteration, but it works. You made light so PHYSICAL. Beautiful.

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  2. AnonymousApril 17, 2011 at 9:56 PM

    I thought that too about the alliteration, kept it though because none of it was intentional

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