Loud claps of anger
Pent up inside the blue
For too long.
Face turned heavenwards,
The rain is my tears
Enveloping me within
The downpour of my soul.
My chilled skin is
Akin to yours now,
Visible as carved stone
As a name and numbers.
I stand among a battlefield
Of life, where death
Defies defeat.
I stand drenched in mortality.
The thundering roars are my screams
And the lightning my denial.
This weight brings me
To a wet kneel.
A prayer to the rain
To flood me back to you.
I really liked it. Stanza four is absolutely terrific. You continue to impress me.
ReplyDeleteI don't like it.
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