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My friends, this blog is dedicated to those men and women who go out of their way to be remarkably interesting. In other words, all of those fascinating Stanton students (or, in the rarest of cases, students from other schools) can join this blog to appreciate creative writing developed by us students. I, Braden Beaudreau, the creator of this blog, will post my past, present, and future works on this website, and those who join and comment will get the same opportunities. May all of you live in happiness and peace, and never forget: being interesting is the only way to stand out from the masses.

Saturday, November 6, 2010

Platonic?

You seem so dark
And I so light
The silence between us
Just doesn’t feel right.

Though I’m not one to show
My heart on display
I thought you could see it,
For it’s long been that way.

You invade my mind
More often than you know,
I smile and wave
Then just watch as you go

To some place in reality:
I know where it is.
But reading your mind
Is an impassable quiz.

I think I understand
But then am proven so wrong:
I hope you won’t stay away
For too very long

Because I miss what we were -
If we were anything –
But for now I’ll stay back
Let you do your own thing
While I live in my dream:
I the queen to your king.
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2 comments:

  1. Matt SimonsNovember 6, 2010 at 3:43 PM

    you create a very solid image here, highliting the separation between the speaker and who is being addressed. Well done.

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  2. AlanNovember 7, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    4th stanza threw me off.

    Too introspectual for me.

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